In this next Episode: Creature confronts Mysterious Voice over revelations made in The Light Side. However he gets some shocking revelations of his own




(I would really like a comment on this one.  I've never done dramatic in acting) 

(Spoilers)

Okay, so if you didn't watch the videos. Here's the plot so far. The reason why I'm telling you this is because I want to know if I made a mistake and made the villain more in the right than the hero. 

Creature, my Pony Avatar I use for my video and profile pics, is in the middle of training because he is sick of being mostly under powered against enemies. His friend the Mysterious Voice drops this hint about where he lives. The Dark Side Castle is the home of all the magical residue from evil deeds, basically, from everywhere. Creature, however, is having a difficult time controlling the power he possesses. 

After a minor bit of success, Creature goes to recover a training item that he launched pretty far because it looks like one of MLP's worst villains. However it basically gets disintegrated at a new location that Creature has not discovered. Which is basically the Light Side Castle, where this evil there is good. The Light Side Castle is supposed to be the home of a pony known as Solar Wings. Solar is supposed to be the guardian, and is ment to teach others what is good and the nature of good. However, when he was younger, Solar lost his master to a Creature's best friend Mysterious Voice when Mysterious voice was the Guardian of the Dark Side. 

When Creature finds out, he goes to confront Mysterious Voice and learns how the Guardians are made. The Light Side Guardians are all trained and thanks to these mystical bracelets they wear are ageless. However the Dark Side Guardians are created from the power of the Dark Side Castle. Mysterious Voice reveals he's not the Dark Side Guardian anymore though...Creature is. 

Understandably Creature does not take this well and runs off then runs into an avatar of the Dark Side to help him come to terms with all of this. Creature decides to go back and work things out with Mysterious Voice. Little does he know, Solar Wings has been spying on them from the shadows, and is currently torturing Mysterious Voice for what he did to his master. 

(What do you think? Did I accidentally make the Villain more Sympathetic than the hero of the story? Is Solar more in the right?)