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Creature Of TheNight: So we got that established 29 minutes ago
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Naru: regina still leaves Alex while pregnant for the same reason, but instead of dying in the streets, Richard finds and kidnaps her, throwing her in the dungeon until baby Amelia is born 29 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: Here's an interesting idea 28 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: First off Love it 28 minutes ago
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Naru: after she is born, Ricky tries to torture her for info but ultimately kills her and adopts baby Amelia bc haha I have pendragon’s child but she’ll be MY daughter as a 28 minutes ago
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Naru: i raise her 28 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: Second off, you know how I've been wanting to have Kira and Eric be more part of the story? 27 minutes ago
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Naru: Amelia grows up none the wiser, she believes her mother died in childbirth and Rich is her father 27 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: Again, love it 27 minutes ago
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Naru: Lemme finisshhhh 27 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: Okay, okay, okay 27 minutes ago
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Naru: shes never allowed to leave the castle, sheltered and wicked book smart, etc, as the castle is invaded she gets lost amongst the flee to the safe area of the castle and comes face to face with Pendragonx 26 minutes ago
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Naru: he recognizes her immediately, she has no idea who he is and gets pulled to safety as he and Richard lock in battle, Richard taunts him with Amelia, kills him, but not before Alex tells Percival he has to rescue Amelia 25 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: Interesting 25 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: Can I propose my part or do you have plans? 25 minutes ago
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Naru: thus ensues the knights fleeing/losing the war/not all of them dying as Percy embarks on his new quest which is where we’re thinking would be a good place to start the thread 25 minutes ago
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Naru: now I’m done 25 minutes ago
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Naru: I was wondering about Eric and Kira but this plot won’t work if Kira knows about Amelia 24 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: Well, my idea for Kira and Eric is this. 24 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: Instead of Kira and Eric leaving for Hollow, Eric turning on his father, we do something...I've NEVER done 24 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: Eric turns Kira to Richard the IV's side 24 minutes ago
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Naru: I was thinking maybe something along the lines of Eric and Kira don’t even know about each other until after the war 22 minutes ago
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Naru: and Kira is a prisoner of war maybe 22 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: Kira tells her new father in law to be about her mother leaving 22 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: Nah, I'm really set on this one because I've NEVER done it 22 minutes ago
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Naru: The pause in your reply 22 minutes ago
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Naru: lol okay...? 21 minutes ago
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Naru: kira can’t recognize Amelia though 21 minutes ago
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Naru: Amelia needs to be oblivious 21 minutes ago
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Naru: I want her to be completely oblivious 21 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: Okay, lets add something dramatic 21 minutes ago
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Naru: We could say Kira also never knew about the second daughter, even Pendragon didn’t know Amelia was alive 20 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: Or, how about, to make Kira more interesting, have Kira know, but is sworn to secrecy by Richard and Eric 20 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: Richard because he wants to raise Amelia as HIS child 19 minutes ago
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Naru: I don’t like that 19 minutes ago
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Naru: u 19 minutes ago
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Naru: i don’t want anyone but Richard to know 19 minutes ago
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Naru: and maybe Eric 19 minutes ago
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Naru: maybe 19 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: Okay, here's how we get around it, Eric and Kira are talking one night with Kira explaining why she came to Eric 18 minutes ago
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Naru: I think it works better than Pendragon thought and told everyone Regina was dead and no one knew she was pregnant 18 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: She says she's never forgiven her father for driving her mother away, 17 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: Eric tells his dad about a possible threat 17 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: Richard finds Regina...and finds out she's pregnant 17 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: Then you know the story from there...you wrote it
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Creature Of TheNight: So Eric would figure it out quickly but Kira would be oblivous because she's always assumed her mother was dead 16 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: To be fair she's right but XD 15 minutes ago
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Naru: Eric’s only a few years older than Amelia how does that work...? 15 minutes ago
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Naru: I’m lost 15 minutes ago
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Naru: Eric’s not like 30 14 minutes ago
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Naru: sorry 40 14 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: Now my problem is figuring out why anyone would willingly turn on Pendragon for Richard IV 14 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: We can age him up XD 14 minutes ago
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Naru: I’m not following 14 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: See this is why I hate ages in threads and usually have (Reletive age) instead of actual age 13 minutes ago
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Naru: Eric and Kira would’ve probably met around 14/15 I’m assuming, Amelia would’ve been 10 or so by then 13 minutes ago
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Naru: I think it’s important here though 13 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: They met when they were in their 20's 13 minutes ago
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Naru: because it causes confusion and inconsistency 13 minutes ago
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Naru: so there’s no way he could’ve told Richard about Regina 12 minutes ago
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Naru: i think you’re making this a little complicated here 12 minutes ago
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Naru: amelia’s only 4/5 years younger than Kira 12 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: I just Kira and Eric to be more important XD 12 minutes ago
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Naru: they can be but you don’t have to make it this complicated 11 minutes ago
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Naru: just pause a moment and let me write it out 11 minutes ago
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Naru: 5 year old Eric Elodus awakens to a surprise, he has a new baby sister. His dad tells him she’s very important and Eric needs to look after her always 11 minutes ago
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Naru: they grow up together, Amelia sheltered and smart, Eric training to be king one day 10 minutes ago
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Naru: eventually, war breaks out and Eric meets Kira, convinces her that the war is dumb and she should join him and his father 10 minutes ago
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Naru: Kira knew her dad drove Regina away, and that she’d been found dead several months later, no one knew about the baby 10 minutes ago
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Naru: so upon meeting Amelia, nothing is out of the ordinary, this is just the little sister Eric talked about sometimes 9 minutes ago
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Naru: she doesn’t know about a baby because she never knew there was one 9 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: I like it so far 9 minutes ago
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Naru: That’s about it, Amelia stays oblivious, as does everyone else 8 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: However, I need a more compelling reason for Kira to leave then just "War is Dumb" 8 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: Here's what I got for Kira leaving 8 minutes ago
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Naru: Up to you if Richard tells Eric, but I think he’d maybe blackmail Eric into silence by threatening to kill Amelia 8 minutes ago
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Naru: or kill Kira your pick 8 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: Kira joins up with Richard IV because she's never forgiven her father for driving away her mother, she loves Eric, and she sees the positive side of RIchard's leadership (Yes there were some XD) 7 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: And Richard is one happy bastard 7 minutes ago
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Naru: That was just a blanket explanation for the Amelia aspect, how Eric convinces Kira to abdicate is up to you 6 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: He has BOTH of Pendragon's children under his control and one of them he didn't have to do SHIT for XD 6 minutes ago
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Naru: Sure, just fuck Pendragon’s shit right up in the end 6 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: After that, Richard basically treats Kira like she's always been part of the family...and yeah is definently preparing Eric to take his throne. His son just gave him the JACKPOT XD 5 minutes ago
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Naru: So what’s your verdict, Eric knows Amelia isn’t his blood relative or doesn’t? 4 minutes ago
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Creature Of TheNight: I like your idea that he doesn't know 4 minutes ago
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Naru: i’d imagine growing up together they’re really close and like brother and sister regardless but 3 minutes ago
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Naru: alright, so, they believe they are blood brother and sister 3 minutes ago
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Naru: only Richard knows, and now the Table Knights